Hola Jari! The work you have here is really good but I have some improvment's: Next time you could use more interesting adjectives and words Describing Tynker, You could also ask a freind to check the puncuation, As your writing is half a Paragraph with no Pauses. You could also add a link to TynkerNext time. Other than that it was good, Pictures are great, The Writing is pretty good; And so is the background.
Hola Jari! The work you have here is really good but I have some improvment's: Next time you could use more interesting adjectives and words Describing Tynker, You could also ask a freind to check the puncuation, As your writing is half a Paragraph with no Pauses. You could also add a link to TynkerNext time. Other than that it was good, Pictures are great, The Writing is pretty good; And so is the background.
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